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    First Animation Ever

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    Diomedes
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    First Animation Ever

    Post  Diomedes on Fri Dec 17, 2010 8:53 pm

    http://www.truploader.com/view/830902
    this is my very first attempt at animating, i would really appreciate some feedback. Very Happy

    [Aeon Industries]
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    Re: First Animation Ever

    Post  [Aeon Industries] on Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:38 pm

    Diomedes wrote:http://www.truploader.com/view/830902
    this is my very first attempt at animating, i would really appreciate some feedback. Very Happy

    At the beginning the stick is a way too big.
    Then Animation is quite fast as i can't understand how's that stick is moving - flying?
    Jump physics are wrong. Just wrong.

    But for the first one it's really awesome. Now work on simple stick moving like running.

    Happy animating Wink
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    focus
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    Re: First Animation Ever

    Post  focus on Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:23 pm

    the walk was little too fast and the stick was a way to big in the first part
    but it was very good for your first flash animation =)
    good luck with animating dude =)

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